I listened to it all :D
It would be interesting to add a melodic bassline to this.. i.e a wet/smooth repeated note just to keep the listeners attention. Nothing too imposing - to preserve the mood.. something very subtle and low-key is what I have in mind. Ever played the game 'Uplink' or 'Darwinia'? This would suit such a game [Almost. This is slightly too happy for those games]
The music was quite random, I liked the ambient and atmospheric nature of the track, from the beginning it caught my attention.
The piano track is a nice touch, perhaps it would be better to add a slight bit more reverb to it or change the type of reverb, because it sounds a bit too close, it would be better if it sounded a bit further away. Or at least, if you could make some of the notes sound further away than others, to give a sense of echoing depths...
Overall I quite liked this. Definitely original, although it is similar to some Swedish ElectroPop & IndieRock.
P.S Nice snail :P
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